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I was wondering if anyone here had a short poem they wouldn't mind sharing with me. I'd like to take the words from it and include them in a new piece of artwork I'm going to make. you'd get full credit for the poem, that's no problem with me. The darker the poem the better, something personal and imaginative. if you're willing to do so, just send it through e-mail (it's in my profile) thanks :) |
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i have a few lines from a dark poem.... =0) i need to find it......ehheheh |
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There once was a man from Nantucket... I forgot the rest. ;) |
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lol |
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this is what is is so far.......dunno if it's actually finished or if i'm going to add more to it. Always remember, as the shadows blow their blackened scent of roses across your soul I'll be there to sweep the blanket of ashe from your nose and eyes so that you may breathe and see your way again... thats it so far...heheh....it may not be dark enough for you.....but it's dark for MOI =0) |
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wow, that was my 1100th post! (plus 1 now) |
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that's very good actually, I like it |
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<-- takes histrionic pose "the cat is on the roof" |
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I'm still 2 or 3 dozen ahead of you...whatever that proves... :| |
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That's a very evil cicada you got there Iroel... :O |
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heheh thanks.....dunno if i really like it but it popped into my head one morning when i couldn't sleep =0) |
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tsk no contest with mine ¬_¬ |
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Life’s a dream From which if I ever should wake I want to live like I sleep And dream I’m awake -Timothy Grover |
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oh fuck you apostrophe, fuck you |
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i've got a poem, very not dark at all.... i've posted it on here a long time ago...still up for hearing it if it's anti-dark? |
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this poem is truth: there are no gods, we are not here for a reason, we evolved from single cell organisms, mutated by radiation into what we are today. |
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I have an Irish Thanksgiving poem: ;) Go fetch a turkey and some Irish whiskey. Take a wee drink of whiskey. Put the turkey in the oven. Take two more wee drinks of whiskey. Make shure oven is good and hot. Take three more wee whiskeys of drink. Make sure hot is still the oven. Take four wee whisks of drinkey. Go wee. Turk the bastey. Whiskey 'nother bottle of get. Give the turkey a dink of wilkey. Glass yourself a pour of whiskey. Bake the whiskey for four hours. Take the oven out of the turkey. Floor the turkey up off of the pick. Turk the carvey. Get yourshelf another wottle of biskey. Set the trimble and pour self a glass of turkey. Bless the saying, pass and eat out. Bless one us and all. Holly Happidays. |
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thats it and all there is to it kids. |
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sorry to say but its the truth. and i feel sorrow for the people who are blinded by religion |
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Ahhh the fine man educated by private christian schools... =] |
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men* |
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chek my tie baby |
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im wearing a dickyboy costume |
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I wear a similar tie too when I go to school... |
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Phoenix blue with goldn things on it.... |
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thanks for all the responses everyone. i'm currently working on the piece now. i'll post a link whenever i feel that it's "finished" |
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Ahem... Excuse the interruption of your schoolboy fashion talk, but I would like comments on my poem... I mean, whenever you get the time... :\ |
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the world is very flat there is no doubt of that |
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it just sounds like a straightforward sentence, i cant see anything poetic... |
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may i say, very irish daweeze |
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whoa, i didnt want to sound as if i was criticizing you in a negative way! sorry if i did. i was just wondering why you say it's a poem. |
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comment on mine now |
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poems dont have to rhyme you know cortex |
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youre kidding right? ;) i know, but it just sounds like a normal sentence to me. still good though. |
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it's funny, when you toss something out there that you never have before, you want people to at least say they liked it, or appreciate it. When they don't, you feel like you failed. Fuck that, I like what I wrote, i hope some of you enjoyed it. (hug: DaWeeze) |
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was that directed to me? |
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not really, just a general comment DaWeeze mentioned how no one replied, and same with mine. Some feel like they require validation for their work. I say fuck it, I hope you enjoyed mine. Comments not required, * they are encouraged however :)* |
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Writing poems that don't rhyme is like making music with a computer. No challenge. |
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*cough* |
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Oh chill out William Carlos Williams. |
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*cough* :) |
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We anxiously await Book III of the Sore Throat Chronicles! "Only time will tell if this emerging genius will find a pack of lozenges" - the New Your Review of Complicated Think-Think |
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* York :: stabs own skull repeatedly :: |
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you sure are religious for someone who feels sorrow for the religious. keep up the faith. |
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i did like the poem though, for your raw honesty. |
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some really good stuff in here. i've finished the first picture... decided to do a short series of them, since there's been a couple good 'poems' posted. although, BlatantEcho, i don't think i'm gonna use yours. i just was looking for something original, yours was a nice quote and all, but you didn't come up with it. unless you're "Timothy Grover" and i didn't know |
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Click the image to see the full-size version. |
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ohhhhh is that ashes from MY poem.......coooooooool beans =0) lemmie look!! |
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yep, that's your poem :) |
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oh oh myyyyyyyyy how lovely....... it reminds me of the movie the MATRIX.....dunno why but thats what i think when i see it. very nice spleendonor.....your name is certainly original....tee hee you're welcome for using my poem, and thanks for finding it apropos =0) |
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