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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2002-10-04 23:08 [#00393206]
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haiku is three lines long.
first line: 5 syllables second line: 7 syllables third line: 5 syllables
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Amonbrune
from Vancouver (Canada) on 2002-10-04 23:10 [#00393208]
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Time Travel
The past resembled forgotten thoughts I never knew you could do that I want to escape now
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2002-10-04 23:10 [#00393209]
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pharmaceuticals undiscriminatingly contaminating
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Amonbrune
from Vancouver (Canada) on 2002-10-04 23:11 [#00393210]
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Summertime
Three around the hollow tree Hands grasped either person on either side The sound of singing came
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DaWeeze
from WANTED IN 16 STATES! on 2002-10-04 23:11 [#00393211]
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Message board is slow Filled with nonsense, strange and cracked DaWeeze loses space...
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Amonbrune
from Vancouver (Canada) on 2002-10-04 23:12 [#00393212]
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oops i thought you meant words
k i screwed up big time...
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2002-10-04 23:12 [#00393213]
Points: 24593 Status: Regular | Followup to Amonbrune: #00393208
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dammit amon -- didn't you read the goddam specifications! don't you know what a syllable is??
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Amonbrune
from Vancouver (Canada) on 2002-10-04 23:13 [#00393215]
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YES I DO!!! now at least...
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DaWeeze
from WANTED IN 16 STATES! on 2002-10-04 23:14 [#00393216]
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BadOrb plays in ears Strange Orb-like sounds make me glad I love this album!
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Amonbrune
from Vancouver (Canada) on 2002-10-04 23:14 [#00393217]
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Amon's Sorry-Time Haiku
Lets try this again I messed up so bad darn it Amonbrune good boy
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2002-10-04 23:18 [#00393220]
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amonbrune must die he has spoilt mystic haiku now he must be killed
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DaWeeze
from WANTED IN 16 STATES! on 2002-10-04 23:21 [#00393222]
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Chill the fuck out boys Everyone makes some mistakes Go back and have fun
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2002-10-04 23:25 [#00393224]
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DaWeeze is buddha bringing happy peace to all at X-L-tronic
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DaWeeze
from WANTED IN 16 STATES! on 2002-10-04 23:30 [#00393226]
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I'm a minor god Can lift heavy things and throw Need own TV show
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Amonbrune
from Vancouver (Canada) on 2002-10-04 23:31 [#00393227]
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AMONBRUNE IS ANGRY YOU HAVE DISRUPTED MY SLEEP I SHALL NOW TOUCH YOU
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2002-10-04 23:42 [#00393234]
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marlowe is minor- -keyed symphony of sadness now comes the coda
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Amonbrune
from Vancouver (Canada) on 2002-10-04 23:43 [#00393238]
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Sean Booth and Rob Brown Destroy your city with sound You're left quivering
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pachi
from yo momma (United States) on 2002-10-04 23:53 [#00393250]
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don't forget tankas as well ;) :
line 1) 5 syllables line 2) 7 syllables line 3) 5 syllables line 4) 7 syllables line 5) 7 syllables
i'm currently doing haikus in my german class at school, so i find this coincidental. i'll do a haiku in german then:
Toilettenpapier Man kann ohne stinkende Händer abwischen
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Amonbrune
from Vancouver (Canada) on 2002-10-04 23:58 [#00393254]
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LETS GET IT ON HARD YOU COB OF CORN SO JUICY GET IN MY BELLY
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2002-10-05 00:10 [#00393265]
Points: 24593 Status: Regular | Followup to pachi: #00393250
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keep your ponsey tankas to yourself motherfucker! and don't bring any stinking Rennets - (4-4-6-6- 10-l2), or Rictameters - (2-4-6-8-10-8-6-4-2) here either!
ok!
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roygbivcore
from Joyrex.com, of course! on 2002-10-05 00:14 [#00393268]
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amonbrune, get this your topics are good natured, but they will not save you
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pachi
from yo momma (United States) on 2002-10-05 00:29 [#00393276]
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*dismisses Mr. Tanka, Miss Rennet, and Dr. Rictameter*
standing in my crib teddy glaring with queer eyes rattle by my foot
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2002-10-05 00:35 [#00393278]
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oh syd barret oh i love to hear your music because i love you
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J198
from Maastricht (Netherlands, The) on 2002-10-05 04:26 [#00393381]
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some of the best haiku's i've ever read are in Fight Club
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pOgO
from behind your belly button fluff on 2002-10-05 04:51 [#00393385]
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You know what I hate? Please release me let me go That song sucks so bad
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Jimmy James
from Burnaby (Canada) on 2002-10-05 06:59 [#00393410]
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haiku's fuckin' rule! I love to think them up, it takes no time at all
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2002-10-07 19:32 [#00395738]
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dear mister richard elusive demands answer respond if you can
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roygbivcore
from Joyrex.com, of course! on 2002-10-07 22:38 [#00395914]
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sometimes i wonder do you remember me now? i was a moose once
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2002-10-07 22:43 [#00395916]
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i am a turnip please do not eat up my flesh i rather like it
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rarndaraki
from from from from (United States) on 2002-10-07 22:44 [#00395917]
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great avatar roy I like the colors and shapes its very soothing
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rarndaraki
from from from from (United States) on 2002-10-07 22:46 [#00395920]
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music is a joy poop is a boy toy and i i am everything
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rarndaraki
from from from from (United States) on 2002-10-07 22:47 [#00395921]
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i think i am good writing haikus in the hood i think i am smart
im a big fart there aint no talent to this save my broken heart
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pachi
from yo momma (United States) on 2002-10-07 23:09 [#00395931]
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a sandbed plateau a night of uncertainty someone watches us
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2002-10-07 23:12 [#00395933]
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a fly am i am i a fly am i am i a fly? me? i am!
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afxNUMB
from So.Flo on 2002-10-07 23:22 [#00395939]
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Desire me tonight Your hands caress my body so... To cum is such joy
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2002-10-07 23:29 [#00395942]
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my hand is sticky i have cum while jerking off to pictures of you
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Zeus
from San Francisco (United States) on 2002-10-07 23:32 [#00395944]
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oh i wish i was an oscar myer weiner this, i want to be
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diemax
from somewhere in tennessee :( (United States) on 2002-10-07 23:35 [#00395945]
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marlowe is sexy i would like to squeeze him covering my eyes
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diemax
from somewhere in tennessee :( (United States) on 2002-10-07 23:35 [#00395946]
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now can we stop this nonsense?
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2002-10-07 23:38 [#00395948]
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never diemax, NO! a haiku a day is my most evilest aim
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pachi
from yo momma (United States) on 2002-10-07 23:43 [#00395953]
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i am the snowfrog i wait atop the glacier leap, descend, impact
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2002-10-07 23:45 [#00395955]
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haikus are fun haikus are addictive stuff my haiku. the end.
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diemax
from somewhere in tennessee :( (United States) on 2002-10-07 23:47 [#00395957]
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i will kill you all i will defile your remains and devour your skin
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