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BILE
from São Paulo (Brazil) on 2002-11-28 20:10 [#00460611]
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hey everyone, if you would be so kind, check out my new song - just finished the final editing tonight, i'd appreciate any comments
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qrter
from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2002-11-28 20:13 [#00460615]
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OH ALRIGHT ALREADY!
STOP TWISTING MY ARMMM!
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BILE
from São Paulo (Brazil) on 2002-11-28 20:14 [#00460617]
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haha
;P
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BILE
from São Paulo (Brazil) on 2002-11-28 20:14 [#00460619]
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do you make music qrter? i don't think i've heard any of them if you do
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qrter
from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2002-11-28 20:17 [#00460621]
Points: 47414 Status: Moderator | Followup to BILE: #00460619
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why yes!
to be found here..
mah musik
my apologies for the crappy quality, well, thats the zebox 5MBmax.persong-rule for you..
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BILE
from São Paulo (Brazil) on 2002-11-28 20:20 [#00460622]
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'met dit' is quite cool, first i've listened to so far
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qrter
from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2002-11-28 20:22 [#00460624]
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okay. I will now give my comments.
funny little melody - I have a weakness for those, I can tell you. however, this desperately needs something more. the track sounds like just one track on a 4-track song, if you see what I mean. its like, you now have your basis, now you need to build upward. just modulating up and down a bit won't DO, young man!
kind of would like to hear you do something freaky with this, something unexpected. but thats just me..
the percussion is okay, its there for the melody. the added percussion in the last 10 seconds or so did make me laugh - in a good way, I might add. just seemed funny, which is always a plus.. :)
overall, nice production. I guess it comes down to this: the track as it is now, is a bit too docile, needs fukking up AND over a bit.
go on, my son..
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qrter
from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2002-11-28 20:23 [#00460625]
Points: 47414 Status: Moderator | Followup to BILE: #00460622
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thanks. its one of my own favourites. 'larve' is the last one. it has one of those 'funny little melodies' as I mention above..
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qrter
from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2002-11-28 20:23 [#00460626]
Points: 47414 Status: Moderator | Followup to qrter: #00460625
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um, last as in latest..
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BILE
from São Paulo (Brazil) on 2002-11-28 20:24 [#00460627]
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hmm it is pretty basic, i see where you're coming from
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