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offline BILE from São Paulo (Brazil) on 2002-11-19 15:56 [#00448487]
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alright, I've been a bit reluctant to do this, but for the
first time I'm giving out a link to download a song I just
finished today.

if you absolutely need a genre, i guess i'd say
experimental/down-tempo... just take a listen though and see
what you think of it. all feedback is welcome.

Hesitant.mp3


 

offline qrter from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2002-11-19 16:03 [#00448495]
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OKAY! getting it now..


 

offline qrter from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2002-11-19 16:05 [#00448501]
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why have you been reluctant, anyway..?


 

offline BILE from São Paulo (Brazil) on 2002-11-19 16:07 [#00448502]
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just wasn't sure if anyone would like it or not, or if it'd
be as good as everyone else's. a lot of people on here make
some damn good music, so i guess i felt a little intimidated
by that


 

offline Crocomire from plante (United States) on 2002-11-19 16:09 [#00448503]
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phat drum sounds...
really like the sounds
and the arrangement
this is not bad at all


 

offline Crocomire from plante (United States) on 2002-11-19 16:10 [#00448504]
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i was expecting more of the beats to kick in though and
really kick phatness, so in that respect it left me wanting.


 

offline BILE from São Paulo (Brazil) on 2002-11-19 16:12 [#00448505]
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it does need a bit more work with the drums, they're a bit
too "distant" i think


 

offline two from Rataq (Qatar) on 2002-11-19 17:21 [#00448553]
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was pretty good tune mate :-)


 

offline Elastic from Zidum (Kiribati) on 2002-11-19 17:28 [#00448567]
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very cool indeed !!


 

offline Alliat from Kópavogur (Iceland) on 2002-11-19 17:48 [#00448589]
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That's a keeper!! :)


 

offline BILE from São Paulo (Brazil) on 2002-11-19 18:46 [#00448639]
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thanks everyone!
:)


 

offline qrter from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2002-11-19 19:17 [#00448672]
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this is quite good..

I think you need to do something with all that flange +
reverb in the beginning - it makes it sound kind of old (as
in '90s). a lot of reverb always makes me kind of suspicious
- feels like someone is trying to use it as filler.. I'm not
saying you're doing that here.. ;)

the melody is great.. love how you make it clip like hell,
that really works here..

I agree with crocomire, I expect some real bassy drums
soon.. and somehow some kind of really weird break around
3:00.. gets a bit boring there.. it feels like its should
make a sudden change..

overall - not bad at all. :)


 

offline BILE from São Paulo (Brazil) on 2002-11-19 19:20 [#00448676]
Points: 1769 Status: Regular | Followup to qrter: #00448672



thanks again :)

and i honestly do agree with the points you've both made
about the song. i felt the intro was too long perhaps, and
there is a spot where it gets a little repetitive [around
the 3:00 minute mark you mentioned] - but now that those
points have been made, i can go back and hopefully improve
upon them :)


 

offline qrter from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2002-11-19 19:21 [#00448679]
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yeah, go for it..

post a new version when you're done.. :)


 

offline LeCoeur from the outer edge of the universe (United States) on 2002-11-19 21:21 [#00448888]
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i'm d/ling now......i'll let you know after i give it a
listen =0)


 

offline 69 from 69 on 2002-11-19 23:25 [#00448992]
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not to bad, i liked it


 

offline uviol from United States on 2002-11-19 23:37 [#00448995]
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The weird little melodies are nice, and I like the reverb.
I'm a reverb junkie. That's why I like Ae. :) the drums are
cool.. the bang-clang delayed percussion reminds me vaguely
of O.S.T... anyway I enjoyed it


 

offline w M w from London (United Kingdom) on 2002-11-20 02:18 [#00449122]
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AND NOW
laaaaaaadies and geeeeeentlemen, it is our pleasure to
announce that bile, yes BILE, has announced that finally he
will release some of his very own organized sound to his
starving curious fans in a move experts are calling "the
biggest, most magic revelation since willy wonka opened his
chocolate factory"

I thought it was a big pile of noisy crap. congratulations.


 

offline w M w from London (United Kingdom) on 2002-11-20 02:19 [#00449123]
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ooooooh maaaaaan MY POSTS ARE SO AWESOME!!


 

offline Mickey Mouse from The Moon on 2002-11-20 02:20 [#00449128]
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hahahaha! wMw

If you were Emma Bunton, and I were the LoLo
telletubbie...... I would lick you up and down like a
popsicle!!!1

w00t!


 

offline bill_hicks from my city is amazing it is calle on 2002-11-20 02:43 [#00449138]
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it's la la you fool


 

offline Mickey Mouse from The Moon on 2002-11-20 09:55 [#00449486]
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*THROWS BIG MOLDY PIE IN BILL_HICKS FACE*

SWINE!

DIE!

*RUNS AWAY*


 

offline KEYFUMBLER from DUBLIN (Ireland) on 2002-11-20 10:12 [#00449495]
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v. nice ... i digested BILE, and it taste good.

i fumble keys, you press the right buttons




 

offline LeCoeur from the outer edge of the universe (United States) on 2002-11-20 10:24 [#00449508]
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I really liked the intro (intro's are a big thing with me
cos it usually sets me up for either liking or disliking a
song)

i liked that there was a melody there....random noises BUG
me.

so to summarize, i liked it and found it very listenable!
=0)



 

offline warpphex from lurkston, ziltyland. (United Kingdom) on 2002-11-20 11:06 [#00449556]
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I like it mate well done .
Another exclusive for the xltronic crew!


 

offline surrounded from it won't be hard anymore to li on 2002-11-20 12:20 [#00449645]
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Hey erik, i quite liked that song! :-)
I kind of agree with the advice given earlier on in this
thread.

I really like the way you slowly build it up, starting with
only one soft sound, and then adding more and more sounds.
But i was expecting it to go even further i guess.
For the song to get even more layers and become a little
more complex.

But still, even as it is i enjoyed it quite a bit :-) Keep
up the good work!


 


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