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Laqeuro
from New York City (United States) on 2002-11-11 14:22 [#00437317]
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production is a bit sloppy, i like the drums
i have a few bad transitions in there
melody needs more variation
oh well
tell me what you think please
Stand
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qrter
from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2002-11-11 14:27 [#00437322]
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so.. this is about the track "Jacob Flexing"..?
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Laqeuro
from New York City (United States) on 2002-11-11 14:27 [#00437324]
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no listen to the new tune
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Laqeuro
from New York City (United States) on 2002-11-11 14:28 [#00437326]
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Stand
try that link
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qrter
from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2002-11-11 14:29 [#00437328]
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oh okay.. there it is.. I'll get it now.
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qrter
from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2002-11-11 14:53 [#00437359]
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mm.. I didn't like the drums. they just sound like drums - which to me is a bit boring.
also, be easy on the reverb..
I quite liked the melody. I do think you should do something different half way through. it needs a switch. you already put in a resting point in the middle, only I was kind of disappointed the melody just came back as it was.
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Laqeuro
from New York City (United States) on 2002-11-11 14:55 [#00437362]
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yeah, i noticed the, melody thing too
i'm not a very big fan of this song, i've done better but oh well
thanks for the review
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Anus_Presley
on 2002-11-11 15:01 [#00437374]
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"production is a bit sloppy" not surre i want to listen to this
"i have a few bad transitions in there" thinking i don't want to herre it
"melody needs more variation" surre I don't want to"
I hate it when people put theirr trrack down beforre you even herre it. i know forr a fact if i listen to it i will spot all you pointed out and not hearr it forr what it is, simply coz you pointed it out.
PEOPLE DON'T DIS YOURR OWN SONG BEFORRE WE HERRE IT
(is what i think)
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Laqeuro
from New York City (United States) on 2002-11-11 15:12 [#00437387]
Points: 3167 Status: Regular | Followup to Anus_Presley: #00437374
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lol
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Anus_Presley
on 2002-11-11 15:15 [#00437391]
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phew, i was worrrried you would take that perrsonally, it wasn't a dig at you orr yourr song, as it seems you know... phew again.
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Laqeuro
from New York City (United States) on 2002-11-11 15:29 [#00437404]
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i'm always critical of my work no matter how good or bad it is
but thanks for pointing that out, i'll try not to do that for my other songs
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qrter
from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2002-11-11 15:35 [#00437415]
Points: 47414 Status: Moderator | Followup to Anus_Presley: #00437374
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I agree.
its also trying to make yourself less vulnerable - "if I say its shit, if someone else says its shit, it won't get to me as much".
you should try to take your own music seriously.
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