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Yo. I made a cover for my fortcoming album/ep thingy. Tell me what you think, it will go to print shortly! |
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... As in constructive critisism, if you have any. |
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cool well to start the resolution is pretty bad, but the main idea works, The hands/fingers don't look correctly rendered which takes away from it, and the mountains in the backdrop would be better drawn like the faces, (more dynamic and less simplified in line) |
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Very VERY useful. Thanks a bunch! I've been drinking coffee and staring at that thing for too long, and you nailed it. Thanks! |
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Honestly, I think if you made the background more detailed it would become too busy... I am thinking the exact opposite, make the lines smoother to bring it more esthetically in line with the ground. Or do the exact opposite, and made the floor look hand drawn, bringing it in line with the mountains. And lower the horizon a little. |
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Yeah i don't think the bakground should be detailed like the faces, but that same quality of line, instead of that really flat look, it's competing with the figures in the foreground, you're going to want to make it go back in space, reference some atmospheric perspective pictures. |
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Thanks a bunch. I've looked at it this morning with fresh eyes, and made some adjustments. Got some perspective into play. |
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definitely an improvement. way to hide the hands with posing :P - i lived with a comic book illustrator who was often guilty of the same thing. |
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Haha, yes. I actually know how to draw hands in a realistic way, it's just a hassle. I find hands especially uninteresting when it comes to comic book style. When you draw naturalistically, they can have some interesting features. I get why they gave Mickey Mouse 4 fingers.... |
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You could just ignore the hand issue altogether and make them squares. It would fit with the rest of the picture. |
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well im right so listen to me. the first one was better; *the mountains are a nicer colour and the lines dont distract but 'hold hands' with the foreground. *i prefer the hands and arms. they are obvs less shit than the second one. *i prefer the positioning of the guys *dont like the clouds, prefer the stars. seriously the first one is all good |
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