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Between my legs feels cold Your hand I'd like to hold Soon I will write you a sonnet Or maybe just wank Comments/feedback appreciated. Please be gentle, this is the first poem I wrote and I put a lot of thought into it. Thanks |
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my comments/feedback indicate that you are a complete twat |
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tractern, its pretty awesome, despite what belb thinks i cant determine if im happy that you used aphex twin to trick me into this thread or sad, cause he will never release another proper release dunno, but i liked your poem |
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ok ive just decided: im pissed off that you used the aphex twin in the topic next time use "this is my first poem" |
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it's easy on the ear and not much else IMHO. |
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If I put that as the title, no one would read this thread. Sorry to piss you off- at least I didn't put 'Aphex Twin new album 15th April' or something, cos that would be truly misleading. Really pisses me off when people do that. |
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Hm, interesting point. I will try to allow some of this implied 'complete twatishness' permeate my next poem, thanks for the feedback, belb! :) |
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oh. |
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